Quizzes: GMAT Sentence Corrections 3

Each of the following questions presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others.

These questions test correctness and effectiveness of expression. In choosing your answer, follow the requirements of standard written English; that is, pay attention to grammar, choice of words, and sentence construction. Choose the answer that produces the most effective sentence; this answer should be clear and exact, without awkwardness, ambiguity, redundancy, or grammatical error.

1) As they create increasingly sophisticated voice and face recognition products, technology firms are lobbying state lawmakers to discourage restrictive new laws which critics call necessary to prevent the violating of user rights.

 
2) The carmaker has announced that it is planning to raise the number of battery-powered cars in its inventory by a 20% increase, a shift that will be balanced by cuts in research and development.

 
3) The decorated cave of Pont d’Arc, which contains pictorial drawings carbon-dated to the Aurignacian period (30,000 to 32,000 BP), and is located in a limestone plateau of the meandering Ardèche River in southern France and extends to an area of approximately 8,500 square meters.

 
4) First drafted by the Archbishop of Canterbury to make peace between the unpopular king and a group of rebel barons, the Magna Carta promised protection from illegal imprisonment, swift access to justice, and limiting feudal payments to the Crown.

 
5) The world's first underground railway, the London Tube, opened in January 1863 between Paddington and Farringdon stations, using, gas-lit wooden carriages hauled by steam locomotives.

 
6) Hitachi's first product was a 5-horsepower electric induction motor, which was initially developed for use in copper mining but soon had become the leading motor in Japan's growing electric power industry infrastructure.

 
7) The business of harvesting ice during winter and storing for use in summer became popular towards the late nineteenth century, a practice that eventually replaced by mechanical ice-making machines.

 
8) A new generation of online tools is aiming to create sophisticated shoppers for medical care, but even when people can access new information, it is not always used effectively by them.

 
9) The term aphantasia, or "mind-blindness," is a neurological condition in which individuals are unable to summon mental images, relying instead on verbal or abstract reasoning skills. 

 
10) Originally presented in a two-act format with spoken dialogue, Smetana's opera The Bartered Bride was not immediately successful, although gaining popularity after numerous revisions.